How To Write a Compelling Backstory For Your Character
When writing a character, backstory is the most fundamental aspect of storytelling, After all, consider how you were shaped by your own life. What memories and milestones have made you into the person you are today?
Whether good or bad, all life experiences will shape our futures. Backstories provide your characters nuance, purpose, and resonance, improving the storytelling experience.
If you want to provide your character with more depth and dimension, here is how to write a compelling backstory:
The Basics of Building Character Backstories
To create a multidimensional character with drive and a purpose in your novel, you need to understand what happened to them before the beginning of your book. For a writer who wants to develop interesting characters and have multiple facets, they need to grasp the fundamentals of backstory.
This begins with a simple question:
Where did they come from?
Yes, this question can be taken both literally and figuratively.
As a writer, you must understand the essentials of their basics. Establish basic information first and then you can dive into your characters' ambitions, conflicts, and the nuances of their personality.
During this initial character backstory creation phase, keep the following steps in mind:
Establish The Basics: What is Their Name? What Do They Look Like? How Old are they? There is a wide range of questions you can ask your character to understand them better.
Define Their Relationships: What relationships did they have growing up? What relationships do they have now? Understand who surrounded them and why. It is also essential to consider how these characters view your character. When you look at character perspectives in this way, you have a better sense of the core traits of your character.
Dive Into Their Motivation: What are the reasons that led them up to this point? Characters often have different motivations for an inciting incident to occur. This can often change over time as well.
Determine Conflict: What is the main conflict of the story and how does it affect your character personally? Further, how does your character feel about this conflict?
Once you square away these essential backstory elements, you can then refine your technique.
Building An Effective Character Backstory Technique
You want to show-don’t-tell when it comes to your backstory. Too often writers will outright tell readers what happened to the character before the book began. However, once you especially the fundamentals of character building it is time to refine the characterization elements in the backstory.
Weave hints of your backstory throughout your story. For example, instead of saying “John Story used to be a salesman” you can say something like “John knew the ins and outs of hitting a quota when it came to getting people to do what he wanted. But that was another job and another life ago.”
This sentence lays the groundwork for the reader to fill in the blanks. By the term “quota” and his convincing other people, the reader can already get a sense of his emotional intelligence. Then, when we add the secondary sentence, they might make the connection of him being a salesman.
The reader may also gloss over this, but the key is to continue to weave this throughout the backstory.
It makes for a compelling read and is more effective than simply, “John was a salesman.”
Here are some additional techniques you can employ:
• Juxtaposition: Mix mystery with exposition. Give just enough details to spark interest.
• Thread Backstory Throughout: Steer clear of info dumps.
• Flashback Triggers: Make use of non-linear narrative strategies.
• Evolve Characters: Permit characters to change over time.
Avoid These Common Pitfalls in Backstory
Writing a backstory is an essential way to help your readers connect with your character. However, you should avoid typical mistakes that might have the opposite approach – either overwhelming the reader or creating a situation where your reader dislikes the character (and not in a fun, villain, or love-to-hate way).
When creating a backstory, here is what you want to avoid:
Clichés and stereotypes
Overloading with unnecessary details
Lack of consistency or believability
Neglecting character agency and growth
Ignoring the influence of backstory on plot and theme
Analyze Memorable Character Backstory
Think of your favorite characters from film and literature. Ask yourself some of the following questions:
What do you like about their personality?
What do you think their motivations are?
How do they interact with other characters?
What choices stand out to you and why?
Once you answer these questions think about how their backstory contributed to the above. It is good practice to answer the above questions using only the backstory. For instance, for the first question you might respond:
They a have a silly, playful personality and are sharp-witted. They fill any kind of tension with jokes. Their backstory contributes to this because they grew up in a very chaotic, often controlling environment, and thus, their sharp wit developed as a need to use their silver tongue to get out of often uncomfortable or even dangerous situations.
Here are a few other examples of how backstories frame popular characters:
Harry Potter, an orphan who is on a quest to self-discovery. This causes him to have an innate curiosity and a need to succeed.
Katniss Everdeen, her traumatic experiences not only drive her to rebel but frame her martyr-like nature and penchant for survival.
Tyrion Lannister, his difficult family dynamics and royal bloodline allow him the desire to eschew politics for more unsavory fun while still holding on to his intelligence and wit.
Embrace Your Character’s Backstory In Their Journey
Writing compelling and unforgettable stories can be achieved by writers who embrace the backstories of their characters. When you spend time delving into your character’s backstories, and then weaving that into your story, you can not only create more dynamic characters, but you also can make a lasting impression on your readers through the story.
Spend time in your character's past so that you can better frame their future.
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